camping by dania san martin
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One sunny day there was a family camping at a forest. Once they got there, they right away started to build their tents. When it got dark they built a campfire and sat around it. The father, the mother, the little sister Gilly and the thirteen year old boy Jake all started to tell ghost stories. When it was his mothers turn to tell a story Jake got a chill up his spine.
The loving family all went to bed and they bought a large family tent so everybody would fit. Then, in the middle of the night Jake woke up. It was a beautiful night while the moon was shining bright and Jake was exploring the forest. He went further in and saw an old two story house. Jake was thinking if he should go in or stay out of the creepy house.
So Jake thought his family could stay in the house until the trip was over. Jake then pushed on the door it wouldn't open so he jerked the door and,'' BOOM!'' It slammed open Jake grabbed his flashlight out of his pocket and quickly turned it on. He shined the light behind him to see if anyone who might have lived there would be behind him. So Jake entered and on his first step he realized something. Jake saw a person.
Jake got a chill up his spine and goose bumps that covered his entire body he was scared. The thirteen year old boy saw a chair and sitting in the chair was an old lady with a dark gray colored hair. She was looking at her fingers that were laying on her lap. Next to her there was a radio playing a gurgle sound not music. Jake pointed the flashlight at her, and she stayed quiet.
Jake finally asked the elderly lady, ‘Are you, Alright?'' The lady started to whisper to herself. Jake turned around and write when he turned back around to look at the lady the old woman was very close to his face and she shouted, ‘I will hurt you get out'' in an evil whisper voice. Jake freaked out and quickly headed back to the camp area. Jake shouted,'' Mom, Dad Help me!'' The old lady grabbed his collar and threw him back on the ground. The evil lady grabbed a pointy stick and wanted to stab him, but before she could do that Jake kicked her chest and she fell back. Jake remembered he had set a trap close to his camping area.
Jake headed that way while the crazy lady still chased after him. When she was in the right position Jake threw a stone at the branch and the net fell on her. Jake yelled, ‘mom dad!'' All of a sudden Jake woke up and realized that it was all a dream. None of that had really happened; he was so relieved and happy. So he went back to sleep worry less.
When the sun came out the family woke up Jake told everybody his scary dream. When he had finished the family had gotten ready to go hunt for their morning breakfast. Gilly his little sister wanted to scare him, she dressed up the same way Jake had described the lady. The family left walking into the Forrest. Jake and Gilly's father found a two story house. Exactly, like the one in Jake's dream. Once Jake spotted the house he couldn't believe what he saw. He pinched himself so many times which he realized he wasn't dreaming. That was when his little sister jumped in his face and Jake ran back to the camp area as quickly as he possibly could. Jake grabbed all of his belongings. He was terrified and wanted to go back home. His parents and sister chased after him. When they finally reached him Jake told them that they all had to go back home. His parents couldn't understand why he was so afraid. Jake explained his dream one last time and finally his parents understood. His parents just told him that probably the owner of the forest lived there. Jake still didn't believe his parents he knew that the forest was full of creepy things. So, Jake decided he would rather stay in his tent than go with his family.
While Jake was resting in the tent he was reading his comic book all of a sudden he hears a strange noise, almost like an older woman's voice trying to tell him something. At this point Jake thought he was going crazy so he ignored it. So, the voice repeated, ‘Jake.'' He couldn't handle it any longer so he got up and grabbed a stick and walked outside the tent and said, ‘What do you want! Leave me alone!'' Jake had to admit that he was scared, but he had to handle it because he knew no one else would fight that lady. Behind the tent popped out the old lady she said, ‘Do you know what I want?" I want you to get off my property. The lady said holding a very pointy stick right on Jake's chest.
You have to go, answered Jake. That's when the lady started to fight with Jake and she threw him on the ground. She wanted to jump on him, but Jake rolled over. He quickly got up and knocked her down, and he hid behind the large tent. The lady was looking for him, then jumped out Jake and stabbed the sweater sleeve down to the floor. Jake ran where his parents were while the lady still chasing him. Jake said,'' Mom, dad Look!'' his parents looked and saw the old woman with two sticks, sharp and pointy. Automatically the mother called the police. The father jumped on the lady trying to get her away from his family.
Everything went by quickly the police came and got the lady arrested. Jake was a hero. He saved his family and other campers. Finally, they got ready to go home so they put their things in the car and said they are never going camping at this forest again.
The loving family all went to bed and they bought a large family tent so everybody would fit. Then, in the middle of the night Jake woke up. It was a beautiful night while the moon was shining bright and Jake was exploring the forest. He went further in and saw an old two story house. Jake was thinking if he should go in or stay out of the creepy house.
So Jake thought his family could stay in the house until the trip was over. Jake then pushed on the door it wouldn't open so he jerked the door and,'' BOOM!'' It slammed open Jake grabbed his flashlight out of his pocket and quickly turned it on. He shined the light behind him to see if anyone who might have lived there would be behind him. So Jake entered and on his first step he realized something. Jake saw a person.
Jake got a chill up his spine and goose bumps that covered his entire body he was scared. The thirteen year old boy saw a chair and sitting in the chair was an old lady with a dark gray colored hair. She was looking at her fingers that were laying on her lap. Next to her there was a radio playing a gurgle sound not music. Jake pointed the flashlight at her, and she stayed quiet.
Jake finally asked the elderly lady, ‘Are you, Alright?'' The lady started to whisper to herself. Jake turned around and write when he turned back around to look at the lady the old woman was very close to his face and she shouted, ‘I will hurt you get out'' in an evil whisper voice. Jake freaked out and quickly headed back to the camp area. Jake shouted,'' Mom, Dad Help me!'' The old lady grabbed his collar and threw him back on the ground. The evil lady grabbed a pointy stick and wanted to stab him, but before she could do that Jake kicked her chest and she fell back. Jake remembered he had set a trap close to his camping area.
Jake headed that way while the crazy lady still chased after him. When she was in the right position Jake threw a stone at the branch and the net fell on her. Jake yelled, ‘mom dad!'' All of a sudden Jake woke up and realized that it was all a dream. None of that had really happened; he was so relieved and happy. So he went back to sleep worry less.
When the sun came out the family woke up Jake told everybody his scary dream. When he had finished the family had gotten ready to go hunt for their morning breakfast. Gilly his little sister wanted to scare him, she dressed up the same way Jake had described the lady. The family left walking into the Forrest. Jake and Gilly's father found a two story house. Exactly, like the one in Jake's dream. Once Jake spotted the house he couldn't believe what he saw. He pinched himself so many times which he realized he wasn't dreaming. That was when his little sister jumped in his face and Jake ran back to the camp area as quickly as he possibly could. Jake grabbed all of his belongings. He was terrified and wanted to go back home. His parents and sister chased after him. When they finally reached him Jake told them that they all had to go back home. His parents couldn't understand why he was so afraid. Jake explained his dream one last time and finally his parents understood. His parents just told him that probably the owner of the forest lived there. Jake still didn't believe his parents he knew that the forest was full of creepy things. So, Jake decided he would rather stay in his tent than go with his family.
While Jake was resting in the tent he was reading his comic book all of a sudden he hears a strange noise, almost like an older woman's voice trying to tell him something. At this point Jake thought he was going crazy so he ignored it. So, the voice repeated, ‘Jake.'' He couldn't handle it any longer so he got up and grabbed a stick and walked outside the tent and said, ‘What do you want! Leave me alone!'' Jake had to admit that he was scared, but he had to handle it because he knew no one else would fight that lady. Behind the tent popped out the old lady she said, ‘Do you know what I want?" I want you to get off my property. The lady said holding a very pointy stick right on Jake's chest.
You have to go, answered Jake. That's when the lady started to fight with Jake and she threw him on the ground. She wanted to jump on him, but Jake rolled over. He quickly got up and knocked her down, and he hid behind the large tent. The lady was looking for him, then jumped out Jake and stabbed the sweater sleeve down to the floor. Jake ran where his parents were while the lady still chasing him. Jake said,'' Mom, dad Look!'' his parents looked and saw the old woman with two sticks, sharp and pointy. Automatically the mother called the police. The father jumped on the lady trying to get her away from his family.
Everything went by quickly the police came and got the lady arrested. Jake was a hero. He saved his family and other campers. Finally, they got ready to go home so they put their things in the car and said they are never going camping at this forest again.